Book Review of Megan Tennant’s Aletheia

 

When I read the author has a degree in biology that was a hint Megan Tennant
would add something new to the dystopian genre. That was only the beginning of
something more spectacular. 736 is a complicated protagonist who lives in a
world that makes readers shiver. She has standards but is real and flawed. This
book engulfs the audience in every detail 736 experiences. It might not start
off at the speed most novels of this genre do, but that’s because the
relationships of various characters are examined with more depth many other
dystopian novels. The author goes beyond simply giving readers a dystopian
novel with twists and turns.

One unique aspect of Aletheia is many of gender norms in our present society
are not the norm. However, there are many other aspects of this world that
still present but far worst. For instance, social control, “a formal and
informal way of increasing conformity and social norms” is still present
in this novel. (The Real World: An Introduction To Sociology) It is very
present when 736 and many others, in the compound, the institution the cured
forced to wear bracelets that will give them pain when certain rules are
disobeyed. The absolute monarchy “which usually have complete control over
their subjects like dictators and constitutional monarchs” (The Real
World: An Introduction To Sociology) is the Prophet. He is the religious leader
and only one with the sacred cure to stop the spread of the disease. The price,
however, is people’s memories from before they drink the cure will be gone even
though your future memories are protected from extinction.

Aletheia does not gloss over anything that could happen in this
post-apocalyptic world novel. Before readers even start, there is a trigger
warning so they can go to a website with listed concepts in the story that
might trigger someone who might suffer PTSD or might be unprepared for how
vividly real this story can get. I finished the book by devouring 11 chapters
in one day to discover how this story would end. The first word is
“Who” and the last word is “death.” Read Aletheia to find
out how everything is linked. I really do not think there is another book like
this on the shelves.

M.A.Greene: Hello. I’m M.A.Greene a YA author reaching for publication. You
can follow me on writing journey on Twitter @MAGreene996.

 

 

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When I read the author has a degree in biology that was a hint Megan Tennant
would add something new to the dystopian genre. That was only the beginning of
something more spectacular. 736 is a complicated protagonist who lives in a
world that makes readers shiver. She has standards but is real and flawed. This
book engulfs the audience in every detail 736 experiences. It might not start
off at the speed most novels of this genre do, but that’s because the
relationships of various characters are examined with more depth many other
dystopian novels. The author goes beyond simply giving readers a dystopian
novel with twists and turns.

One unique aspect of Aletheia is many of gender norms in our present society
are not the norm. However, there are many other aspects of this world that
still present but far worst. For instance, social control, “a formal and
informal way of increasing conformity and social norms” is still present
in this novel. (The Real World: An Introduction To Sociology) It is very
present when 736 and many others, in the compound, the institution the cured
forced to wear bracelets that will give them pain when certain rules are
disobeyed. The absolute monarchy “which usually have complete control over
their subjects like dictators and constitutional monarchs” (The Real
World: An Introduction To Sociology) is the Prophet. He is the religious leader
and only one with the sacred cure to stop the spread of the disease. The price,
however, is people’s memories from before they drink the cure will be gone even
though your future memories are protected from extinction.

Aletheia does not gloss over anything that could happen in this
post-apocalyptic world novel. Before readers even start, there is a trigger
warning so they can go to a website with listed concepts in the story that
might trigger someone who might suffer PTSD or might be unprepared for how
vividly real this story can get. I finished the book by devouring 11 chapters
in one day to discover how this story would end. The first word is
“Who” and the last word is “death.” Read Aletheia to find
out how everything is linked. I really do not think there is another book like
this on the shelves.

M.A.Greene: Hello. I’m M.A.Greene a YA author reaching for publication. You
can follow me on writing journey on Twitter @MAGreene996.

 

Guest Post: Lucia Brucoli’s Article on Writing Setting

Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene996. This is a guest post of a teen writer on setting. Enjoy.

Making the Most out of Setting

One of the first things we learn when analyzing novels is dividing them into manageable chunks: Setting, plot and characters. The last two have been broken down into sub-sections upon sub-sections, but what about setting? Some mark it irrelevant, but it can greatly influence your story.

Take ‘The Lottery’ by Shirley Jackson, for example. It’s the story of villagers who act inhumanely towards one another for the sake of tradition. It wouldn’t have worked if the place was fancy and classy, or if it was in modern day. The prose gives a feeling of the past, and it works in favor of the story.

So how can we write a well-rounded setting? Here are a few things to keep in mind. Make sure to refer back to your genre when reading through, as it will affect the location of your story.

1.      Timing
Setting isn’t just where the story takes place, but also when. It’s possibly one of the first things to think about before the actual world building. What is your world’s history, and where does your story fit into it? This can apply even if you’re writing about an average high school: cities always have a history, and this can be shown subtly throughout the course of your story. Timing becomes more important when your novel is set in the past, future or on another world entirely. For example, if your fantasy novel takes place in a kingdom which has just killed its tyrannous, violent king, there will be traces in your world of that king’s rule. Figure out when your story take place first, then find a physical location.

2.      Make it realistic (to your story)
When finding a physical location, it’s best to make it realistic to your story. For example, if your story starts with average teenagers being chased by ghosts in a haunted house… why are they there? How did they even get there? It’s not normal for modern-day teenagers to be wandering in a haunted house, or for a haunted house to be abandoned there in the first place without an explanation. Figure out what is possible and what is a bit of a stretch, so that everything can be logical in your story.

3.      Consistent
Nothing can confuse readers more than an inconsistent setting. Unless you clearly state that your characters go in a completely different area, be sure to make everything the same. Seasons can of course change, but be sure to make the overall physical location the same. If your character comes back from six months in exile and finds their previous snow-covered, Arendelle-style city turned into a raging hot, desert… There’s got to be some sort of explanation. An extreme exaggeration, but good to keep in mind.

4.      Don’t dump!
One of the most boring things readers can encounter in books is when the writer rambles on and on, describing the smallest, irrelevant details of their world. I get it: describing this wonderful kingdom you created and that you’re passionate about is incredible, because you want readers to visualize exactly what you’re seeing. But careful: too much info-dumping can make your reader lose interest in your story, making them mindlessly skim through the chapter or even worse: Put down the book. Don’t. Let. This. Happen.

So this is it. When done wrong, the setting can make the novel tedious to read through. But when done right, the novel will not only be a smooth read, but enjoyable as well. All the best of luck, and happy creating!

-Lucia

Bio:

Lucia Brucoli is a middle school student working on her young adult sci-fi novel. She is also working to create a community of teen aspiring writers just like her, a community of people who support, encourage and help each other, working together to be officially called ‘authors’. In her free time, she enjoys watching t.v shows, reading, and of course writing.

Twitter: https://twitter.com/BrucoliLucia

Website: https://writerluciabrucoli.wixsite.com/mysite

Antuan Vance Author Interview

  • M.A.Greene: Hello. I’m M.A.Greene a YA author reaching for publication. You can follow me on writing journey on Twitter @MAGreene996.
    So can you tell us when you realized you wanted to be a writer?

Antuan Vance: Let’s see. I started writing a journal of sorts about love and crushes at the age of nine, and superhero stories around ten, but decided I’d write a series of poems when I was eleven. So, I’d say eleven was when I realized I wanted to be a writer, and write a book of poetry. It’s been a part of who I am for a long time. Now, it wasn’t until much later in my life that I truly committed to not just writing but finishing books.

  • M.A.Greene: That is great your passion has been with you so long. What are your favorite and least favorite genres and why?

Antuan Vance: Favorite genre is most likely science fiction because I grew up on it. I watched Star Trek and Star Wars, read the books. I’ve always loved the idea of the future, better technology, and a more mature society. Not to mention, all the cool toys. It’s hard to choose a least favorite genre, primarily because I simply stick with what I know and like. But knowing myself, I’d say non-fiction, biographies. I don’t like stuffy, dry material. I usually associate that with biographies, except for Stephen King’s In Writing.

  • M.A.Greene: Science fiction is a genre is never boring for sure. Speaking of science fiction, your novel The Catalyst falls in that category. Was this your first novel? And if so did you take the traditional publishing or self-publishing route?

Antuan Vance: Yes. The Catalyst was my first finished novel, and indie published. Patience proved to not be within my skill set after I finished that book. The whole post-writing process was tedious, confusing, frustrating, and painful. I intend on taking another stab at traditional publishing with the next novel.

  • M.A.Greene: How long did it take you to write The Catalyst first draft, then to finish the book?

Antuan Vance: I spent a lot less time writing in the time it took to write it, which was about two years. It was really the last three months or so I think where I smashed through half of the book. Finishing it took half the time.

  • M.A.Greene: Are there any other types of writing you enjoy?

Antuan Vance: On occasion, I’m known to rant or blog about justice, integrity, righteousness, reason/logic, and the typical do-the-right-thing soapbox speeches that I hope will inspire people to make better choices or see things in a better way. I have a blog, The Impervious Soul, which is primarily pointed towards living a better life and being a person who is a benefit to those around you. That writing is a major part of my purpose. Regretfully, I sparingly update it. In time, that will change.

  • M.A.Greene: In your own words can you give us a quick summary of what The Catalyst is about?

Antuan Vance: It’s about the last stand of evil, kicked around the galaxy, finding its final fighting grounds on Earth. But they’re defeated. Now, they’re desperate and willing and able to completely eradicate humanity while making a new home for themselves. It’s about a father trying to make a cleaner, better world for his daughter and adopted son, even if it means sacrificing himself to do it. It’s about teenagers on the run for their life. Facing unexpected challenges and leaving a trail of destruction in their wake. It’s about friendship, obedience, trust, and faith.

  • M.A.Greene: Back to your novel, how did you develop the characters Levi, Abby, Violet and John Rider? Did you develop them prior to writing the book or during the process? Also, how did you come up for the aliens “The Red.”

Antuan Vance: There’s usually a little bit of me in every story, and Levi happens to be that bit this time. I started with the basic details of who my characters were, knew what kind of choices they were inclined to make, their motivations, and then let it all unfold during the process. Prepared more for Levi, Abbey, and Violet’s journey than John’s. His part of the story took on a life of its own.

The Red were something else. I knew I needed a villain that had incredible resources and influence. That’s why I gave them the powers they have. So they can be a challenge and are worthy of fear. I knew they were aliens, but their origin story wasn’t completely developed until later, when I had my bigger picture moment in chapter six.

But I saw them as evil lizard monsters, like dragons, like the devil in Genesis, but a species of people who turned away from good origins to serve an evil that promised more than he gave, and it turned them into monsters.

  • M.A.Greene: Speaking of references to the bible. Many of the characters in The Cataylst reference the bible and pray on many occasions. How did these aspects of the bible and God become something so interwoven in this story? Did you know that would central themes to your story beforehand or did the occur as you were writing it?

Antuan Vance: When creating my characters, I knew who was and wasn’t a believer, and that their choices and influence would reflect that. I wasn’t completely certain when certain verses would be quoted, but kept an eye out for opportunities as the story developed. At its core, it’s science fiction. However, I knew it had to exist in a universe with an all powerful God, and reference the story of our salvation. The opportunity to slip that in there was better than I thought. But the central theme was always going to tie into my faith, especially the lesson of obedience.

  • M.A.Greene: Are you familiar with the author Madeline L’Engle the author of A Wrinkle in Time? She wrote various book including fiction books that reflected her faith along with her interest in science?

Where there any other authors you enjoyed reading who had Christian faith based themes interwoven in what was centrally a science fiction or fantasy story?

Antuan Vance: To the first question, yes. A person of great value and purpose lended a copy. It took me a while to read it, as I’m not keen on books with child protagonists. Yet, I could appreciate the theme and intentions. I wrote a brief book review and posted it on Instagram. Didn’t care for the movie. Haven’t read any of her other stuff. Probably won’t.

This is going to sound odd, but Stephen King, well known as a horror writer, has written a number of books that had subtle and strong Christian undertones. The Stand had an older woman, almost like a prophet of sorts, who believed. The Man Jesus was mentioned several times in the Dark Tower series. Needful Things had a town influenced and manipulated by a devilish figure. I don’t seek out and read Christian books. But can see the influence of my faith in fiction.

  • M.A.Greene: Interesting. I have not gotten around to reading anything by Stephen King yet even though I have defiantly watched many of his movies and mini series. I probably will be examining his stories more so now that you have mentioned that whenever I get to reading it.

Back to your novel The Catalyst, minor spoiler alert, you have ADHD as a possible protective factor against the aliens The Red? How did you come up with that theory?

Antuan Vance: While ADHD has become a commonly diagnosed disorder, not all are equal or accurate diagnosis. I’ve come to understand that there’s a slight variance in how information is processed and stored in an ADHD brain compared to human default. I conceived it was an evolutionary and reactive disorder to combat current or future threats to our species. The variance in brain function is kind of like having a firewall in your brain. It can still be hacked or accessed, but with less ease. If a brain can hyper-focus, it can shut out outside influences. If a brain can shift easily from one subject to another, it’s like constantly changing frequencies or IP addresses, therefore making it harder to “log in” someone’s mind and maintain access or control. A brain is perhaps not so different from a supercomputer. Cognitive security could be the same as cyber security, assuming I have either of the two right in theory. I could just as easily be pulling this out of my butt.

  • M.A.Greene: That is definitely a unique way to use ADHD in your novel.
    How did you decide to have a character like Pisces and why did you give her hands? Can you explain Pisces character?

Antuan Vance: Pisces was an audible. I had no intention of having her in the story. But I put John in a tough spot, sent Sasha on her way. He needed another ally. Someone to help him finish what he started and talk him off the ledge. Pisces was the perfect choice. I gave her hands because it’s more convenient for her. For all intents and purposes, she’s a person. It would be nice if she could make her own tuna sandwiches. Explain Pisces. I’m trying to think of a way to explain her without spoiling the broader explanation coming in the sequel. She’s was injected with the alien nanotech and given human intelligence, sapience. She’s just as much a part of the team as everyone else. Because of her predatory nature, she’s a little more aggressive and straight to the point than others. It makes her a great warrior.

  • M.A.Greene: She is defiantly an interesting character readers will enjoy getting to know. Would you categorize The Catalyst as a YA sci-fi or a New Adult sci-fi novel?

Antuan Vance: Originally, I thought both. Abbey and Violet are 17. Levi’s 19. Can’t remember if Jeremy’s 19 or 20. But since this is all happening the day before Abbey’s and Violet’s birthday, they’re pretty much 18. And there are some scenes that are more fitting adult readers. So, let’s say new adult.

  • M.A.Greene: When I was reading it I was curious what category it fell into. So when you write do you write with or without music?

Antuan Vance: With music. Absolutely. Something low, not distracting, and usually nothing with lyrics. Instrumentals. Classics like Beethoven, Mozart, Chopin, Debussy. Soundtracks and suites from movies I enjoy.

  • M.A.Greene: Music can defiantly fuel the writing experience. What is your favorite book and your least favorite and why?

Antuan Vance: It’s hard to nail down a singular favorite. What makes a book my favorite is when it excites me to read more. And not just more of that specific book, but more books period. I like books that excite my interests in literature. William Shatner wrote a series of Star Trek novels. I ate those up as a kid. Dan Brown wrote Angels & Demons, The DaVinci Code. As a college student, I was sucked in. I’m a big Stephen King fan, aka constant reader. A recent favorite would be Ink Mage by Victor Gischler. We already talked about my least favorite, A Wrinkle In Time. Why? If something is my least favorite, it did the opposite of what my favorite does.Instead of exciting me about reading, picking a book, the books I like the least make reading a chore. If I’m forcing myself through and not liking the characters, enjoying the plot, or appreciating the style, I’m not likely to finish, unless I’ve committed myself to finishing it.

  • M.A.Greene: That makes sense. Reading books you force yourself to read, such as assigned readings when back when you were in school and dislike the story or characters can be a chore. What advice would you give parents and family members who worry about children and teen aspiring writers striving towards a profession they could perceive as being a “starving artist”?

Antuan Vance: My best advice is to “get a grip”. Writers are versatile, disciplined, and intelligent. Creatives are unique. They can’t be lumped in with the rest of the crowd, expected to have a regular career. But we can do anything, if we have to. I should also point out that you don’t have to have a degree in English or Writing to be a writer. So, choosing to study something “practical” will only influence and benefit what they write.

Also, free marketing, beta reading, and editing are life savers. So, if you’re going to worry, worry with helpful actions and ask what you can do to help.

What advice would you give to aspiring writers?

Antuan Vance: One: If writing isn’t a top priority, and you really want to do this, you have to be willing to sacrifice time and money from something else. Less Netflix, Hulu, Crackle, TV, YouTube, Twitch, video games, mall visits, whatever. Writing is a passion and priority. Take it seriously. Reduce and ignore your distractions. Two: if you’re not writing, you’re thinking about writing. There are a lot of stories out there to tell. It’s best to always have your mind open to the next project. When you’re bored, as if that’s possible, brainstorm. When you have ten to twenty books on the horizon, pour good ideas into other writers/creatives. Three: people will lead you into a mental prison, but only you can lock yourself in. Don’t allow people to tell you what kind of writer you are, what you should write. If you want to write four, seven, eleven different genres in your career, do it, as long as it works. Also, it’s good to know what’s out there, but try not to get too caught up in what other people are doing. You are you. Unique. Special. Beautiful. Stories are bestowed upon you, to tell them as you are meant to.

  • M.A.Greene: That is wonderful advice for aspiring writers. Thanks for letting me interview you.

If you are wondering where you can purchase Antuan Vance’s The Catalyst, it’s on amazon. https://www.amazon.com/Catalyst-Book-One-ebook/dp/B00WET7HR4/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1542917789&sr=8-1&keywords=the+catalyst+antuan+vance

Book Review of Kerri Maniscalco ‘s Stalking Jack The Ripper

I heard about this book from an author Youtube video and knew I had to read it when the chance arose. Audrey is 17-year-old progressive thinker stuck 1888 London. It’s a time when women society treats women as inferiors. Thankfully she has an uncle who lets her disguise herself as a boy so she can attend his forensic science classes. At the class, she meets Thomas, a witty, handsome man who was a keen sense of observational skills. Unlike her who looks the other way when she brother, overprotective father and many of the men in society, Thomas respects and encourages her intelligence especially as far as solving the murders by Jack the Ripper. Audrey is empathetic about the women were murdered by Jack and is determined to assist help hunt him down. But when she starts to suspect the killer’s identity is someone close to her what will she do? Kerri Maniscalco masterfully weaves forensic science, historical events and memorable characters in this mystery novel.

Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on Twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene996.

Blair Cousins Ouji The Curious Cat Author Interview

Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene996 .

  • M.A.Greene: So first can you tell us when you realized you wanted to be a writer?

Blair Cousins: I think I’ve always wanted to be a writer, but I knew there was no future in it for me. It wasn’t until I started the publishing process of my first book back in 2016 that I realized that this could be a new path for me.

  • M.A.Greene: When you say you “knew there was no future in it for me.” could you explain what you were thinking and what you mean by that?

Blair Cousins: I was thinking about how hard it is to publish a book, back then I hadn’t thought about self-publishing and I knew I would have to write something absolutely fantastic to be published. Not to mention it would have to be shown to the right people. So I didn’t think it could be done, at least for me.

  • M.A.Greene: Publishing does have a lot of work involved and connections. When did you realize this could be your “new path?”

Blair Cousins: I think things started to clear up the more I researched. I joined a lot of self-publishing groups and listened to dozens of authors who were going through the process. By reading their stories, it showed me that it was absolutely possible to become a writer and to be successful at it.

  • M.A.Greene: Thank goodness for writers sharing their journeys the struggles and all. · What was your publishing journey like for Ouji The Curious Cat from the initial idea to publication?

Blair Cousins: Yes! Shout out to author’s who share! It’s actually kind of funny how OTCC came along. It was completely by accident that the story was even written. I wrote OTCC for NaNoWriMo some years ago, however, during that time I had a different idea planned for it. About three days in I scrapped that idea and started working on OTCC. The idea came to me while I was at work, I work with cats and kind of ran with the idea of what it felt like to be a young kitten at a shelter. After I finished writing it, I thought it was good enough to take a chance on. So I looked into the publishing process, I choose self-publishing because I had control over the timeline. At the time I thought I was going to be too busy to wait for a traditional publisher. The rest of my publication journey was completely trial and error and I’m still learning new things today!

  • M.A.Greene: It’s good you did your research. What was the revision process of Ouji The Curious Cat like for you?

Blair Cousins: Very challenging! It’s hard to know what’s right when you’ve read the words dozens of times. That’s why I had betas, but more importantly I hired a developmental editor. He pointed out things in my story that I would have never thought about.

  • M.A.Greene: It was good you were so prepared and did not think you could do everything on your own. Some people mistakenly think that self published books have no one other than the writer involved.

Blair Cousins: Oh yes indeed, you have to build yourself a team. It can get pricey, but it’s totally worth it. Making friends in the industry is also extremely helpful.

  • M.A.Greene: What are your favorite genres and least favorite genres and why?

Blair Cousins: I like science fiction and fantasy, with a hint of humor, because I like to laugh. I’m not fond of romance or historical fiction though, unless it’s has a fair amount of humor in it of course.

  • M.A.Greene: Do you write with music? If so what types of music do you like?

Blair Cousins: I do! I love to write to film scores and edit to soft EDM of various genres. I use Pandora and Youtube a lot, it’s become somewhat of a routine for me.

  • M.A.Greene: Will OTTC have a sequel?

Blair Cousins: Yes it will! I am working on four other books right now and though it won’t be out anytime soon I do have lots more adventures planned.

  • M.A.Greene: One important question I realized I needed to ask is how you would describe Ouji The Curious Cat to readers?

Blair Cousins: OTCC is a fun and adventurous tale about a cat, named Ouji, who runs away from home to find his place. Along the way, he makes a lot of friends and discovers that the world is a lot bigger than his suburban home.

  • M.A.Greene: What age group would you suggest Ouji The Curious Cat for?

Blair Cousins: I would say 10 and up, but it can be read to younger children too.

  • M.A.Greene: Ouji seems to be a loyal friend who is a kind hearted soul. How did you go about developing his character and the other animals in the series.

Blair Cousins: I sort of developed him along the way. I don’t really do much with character profiles, though they seem really helpful. I just focus on what his goals are and try to get him there emotionally. Same with his friends, they start off as archetypes and as the story progresses I discovery their wants and needs as well.

  • M.A.Greene: Are you a plotter or a panser?

Blair Cousins: I would say I’m a plotter, I don’t make super detailed outlines, but I do plan a bit as I go.

  • M.A.Greene: You also have a picture book out. Is that right?

Blair Cousins: Yup, it’s a coloring book with cats. I put it together with my good friend and illustrator, Danielle Dooley

  • M.A.Greene: Can you explain how the picture book is related to OTCC and what the process of working with an illustrator was like?

Blair Cousins: The coloring book is its own series, but there is a small reference to OTCC in there. I had to add it, I couldn’t help myself. As for working with the illustrator, it was sort of a shot in the dark. I had an idea and she had the talent. I always loved her art and she agreed to join me. So it was a very informal, but fun process.

  • M.A.Greene: If there is any advice you would give aspiring writers what would it be?

Blair Cousins: Write as much as you can as often as you can. Whether it’s your own stories or fan-fiction. Have fun with it and don’t stop.

  • M.A.Greene: Thanks so much for letting me interview you. Have a great day

Blair Cousins: No problem, it was a lot of fun.

Blair Cousins is also on twitter. Her twitter name is @BlairEveryWhere and her blog is https://theofficebc.wordpress.com/. To purchase her book Ouji The Curious Cat on amazon  https://www.amazon.com/Ouji-Curious-Cat-Blair-Cousins/dp/0998462101/ref=sr_1_sc_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1542914885&sr=1-1-spell&keywords=blair+cousons+ouji+the+curious+cat

Book Review of Andrea F. Harkins’ The Martial Arts Woman: Motivational Stories of Human Triumph

This book combines the various experiences women of differing backgrounds have as they share how martial arts has impacted their lives. Set in different categories, these women enlighten readers on how martial arts has empowered them. Andrea Harkins is an author, speaker, martial artist, and magazine and newspaper columnist. Some of the stories are specifically hers while others belong to other martial artists.

This book enlightens readers showing that martial arts is not simply about physical strength but digging up strength in many other parts of life. They showed, how even though there have been and continue to be sexist views to women who practice martial arts, the rewards far outweigh the adversity. Obviously, learning martial arts is about protecting oneself. However, many of these women had to unlearn the social barriers that had been instilled in them since childhood, such as learning to be more assertive. Stories of how it helped through physical illnesses and how they passed the lessons learned down to their children so they could kick down any barriers in their way inspiring.

Another fascinating piece of treasure about this book is how it explained how often women build and have various social expectations that differ from than men. It showed the ways women martial arts can especially be empowering for them, such as learning to be more assertive and hold onto their identities when they became wives and mothers.

Many of these women had their own insecurities about starting their practice in at various stages of their lives. Every woman should read this book. Any man who in their lives who are practice martial arts should read this as well. This book is not about disqualifying or belittling men who practice martial arts but highlighting how being Wonder Woman is not a requirement to learn martial arts. It takes ordinary person willing to step into learning what can help them a greater version of themselves.

Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on Twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene996.

Book Review of Kim Chance’s Keeper

I discovered Kim Chance by watching her YouTube videos. So when had the chance to her debut novel Keeper, I was thrilled. The protagonist is 16 years old Lainey. Chance gives the reader a logical studious girl who desires to see more of the world than the place she and grew up living with her Uncle. Her path to self-discovery is the plan she’s for years: Do well on her SAT’s and get into a good college. That is until she starts having what seem to be delusions and discovers she is a witch. Her best friend Maggy, who loves all superhero and supernatural comics, tv shows are convinced before Lainey is of her gifts. I enjoyed seeing a close friend, sisterhood bond between Maggy and Lainey. Also, I was interested in the romance with the mysterious guy who that helps Lainey with her adventures as she learns more about what being a witch entails. Lainey has flashbacks for one of her ancestors who protected a book that the villain is after. Some of the lines were corny but didn’t take away from the overall enjoyment of the story. If you want a book with strong female friendship, deals with family ties, and a logical, caring protagonist, you need to keep an eye on Keeper and read it ASAP. Overall I enjoyed this book and await the release of the sequel, Seeker.

Author Interview with Kim Chance

Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene96.

Keeper cover
  • M.A.Greene: So first can you tell us when you realized you wanted to be a writer?

Kim Chance: I’ve always loved to write, but I didn’t realize I wanted to pursue fiction writer as a career until I was in my 20s. It all started in 2008. I was recently married, and my husband was deployed. I was living in a brand new city without any friends or family nearby. I spent most of my free time reading. One day, I had an idea for a story and I just started writing it, not thinking anything would come of it. I realized very quickly, however, how much I loved creating my worlds and developing my own characters.

Over the next few years, I tried to write as much as possible, but life was pretty busy. During that time, I went to grad school and got my masters degree, and I also got pregnant and gave birth to twins. I wasn’t able to devote as much time to writing as I’d had in earlier days, but once my twins were a little older, I decided I really wanted to pursue writing with more gusto. I’ve never looked back since!

  • M.A.Greene: When did the initial idea for Keeper come to you?

Kim Chance: It was very organic, really.  I was working on a completely different storyline when a certain plot element popped into my head. It was unique and exciting, but it didn’t fit into my current WIP. I tried to brush it aside, but that little element just wouldn’t go away, so I spent a lot of time thinking about the characters and the world that would go along with it. Thus, KEEPER was born!

  • M.A.Greene: How long did it take you to write Keeper’s first draft, then to finish the book?

Kim Chance: I wrote multiple versions of Keeper, but the draft that eventually became the published book took 3 and ½ years to complete.

  • M.A.Greene: I first found out about Keeper and your writing advice from your YouTube videos. When did you decide to make a YouTube channel?

Kim Chance: I created my channel almost three years ago. My first video was published on October 15th, 2015. I wanted a place to chronicle my publishing journey, and I also wanted a forum to share everything I’ve learned with other writers.

  • M.A.Greene: What was your publishing journey like for Keeper from the initial idea to publication?

Kim Chance: I started writing the draft that would late become the published book on June 17th, 2012. I finished that draft on August 8th, 2015. It was one of the coolest moments of my journey so far. I was sitting in a public library with tears pouring down my face because I was so proud of myself for finally finishing.

After that, I did multiple rounds of revising and editing. I recruited two freelance editors to help me whip the manuscript into shape and their feedback was so helpful! They are the reason KEEPER is what it is today. After I had a draft that I was really proud of and felt good about, I began the beta reading process and started entering writing contests. Both of those things lead to even more rounds of R & E. Finally, in March of 2016, I began to query literary agents. I received an R&R from Caitlen Rubino-Bradway (LKG Agency) on May 24th, 2016 and then on September 16th, 2016 after I had sent her the (yet again!) revised manuscript, she offered me representation. BEST. DAY. EVER!!  From there, we did—yup! You guessed it!— ANOTHER round of revisions and then took the manuscript on submission. It took several months, but on February 8th, 2017 I was offered a publishing contract!

  • M.A.Greene: Lainey is a refreshing heroine. She is studious, loyal, kind and intellectual. Where you like her as a teenager? How did you develop her character?

Kim Chance: Thank you! There are definitely parts of me in Lainey, but she is her own person for sure! I was a good student, but not nearly as focused and dedicated to my studies as she is. In terms of development, I did a character profile on her and spent a lot of time getting to know her before I started writing.

  • M.A.Greene: One aspect I love is the positive friendship sisterhood bond Lainey has with her best friend Maggie. How did you decide to have Maggie as her best friend? What was the character development for her like?

Kim Chance: I knew Lainey needed a partner in crime, someone who could help her deal with everything that happens. Since Lainey is so serious, I wanted her best friend to be spunky and funny. Maggie is actually based off of my real life best friend, Carrie. Carrie has been there for through the best and worst parts of my life and I can’t imagine life without her. It wasn’t hard to develop Maggie as a character because I have a living example of such a friend in my own life.

  • M.A.Greene: Do you think the Young Adult genre needs more novels where strong female friendships preserve?

Kim Chance: Absolutely! I think it’s refreshing to see healthy female relationships. I plan to include them in all of my future novels, and I would love to see more and more strong female friendships in fiction!

  • M.A.Greene: In your novel Keeper, Lainey discovers she is a witch. Did you like books and movies about witches? Did you research myths and beliefs of witchcraft for your novel? If so what did you use and intentionally leave out and why?

Kim Chance: Yes! I’m a child of the 90s, so I grew up watching Sabrina, the Teenage Witch, Charmed, and Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I’ve always had a thing for the paranormal, and witches in particular. I’m also a huge fan of Harry Potter & The Chronicles of Narnia. Those were big sources of inspiration for me as well. No, I didn’t really do a lot of research, mainly because I had a pretty good idea already of how I wanted my witches to operate.

  • M.A.Greene: (minor spoiler alert) I am so happy this book did not involve a love triangle between the friends and the guy who shows up. (I will not say who so people have to read Keeper to find out) Did you ever consider love triangles or Maggy and Lainey being jealous over guys or was that never the nature of their friendship.

Kim Chance: Well, I LOVE love triangles (don’t judge me, people!), but I never considered including one in this story. It wouldn’t have been a good fit. While there is a slightly romantic subplot, this book is NOT a paranormal romance.

  • M.A.Greene: It was wonderful the way you made many references to comic book superheroes as Lainey discovers she is a witch and what that entails, was that on purpose?

Kim Chance: Yes! Maggie is a huge comic book fan and so she always used references to compare what Lainey is going through to the heroes in her comics. I’m a big nerd myself, so this was a lot of fun!

  • M.A.Greene: Are you a comic book/ Marvel/DC/ anime fan?

Kim Chance: Yes! I love the Marvel universe!

  • M.A.Greene: Are you only interesting in writing for Young Adults or other age groups as well?

m.Kim Chance: My heart is with Young Adult, so I don’t see myself writing for any other age group any time soon. You never know though!

  • M.A.Greene: What are your favorite genres and least favorite genres and why?

Kim Chance: My favorites are fantasy, historical, and re-tellings! I don’t really have a least favorite, though I tend to steer clear of horror—I’m a big chicken!

  • M.A.Greene: What is your favorite book and least favorite book and why?

Kim Chance: My favorite book is The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald. I’ve read it a million times and I will never be sick of it. I don’t have a least favorite book.

  • M.A.Greene: Do you write with music? And if so what songs helped lightening keep shining in your story as you stormed through when writing Keeper?

Kim Chance: I do! I write to movie scores—I find lyrics distracting. You can find my Keeper playlist here: https://open.spotify.com/user/22mm3tbaxzept6feoi3nkdkkq/playlist/0Mh8UX4ZJQRgz5OC0geA34?si=2PIbqu5NTEet7_6ZKPNmyQ

You can find my playlist for Seeker, here: https://open.spotify.com/user/22mm3tbaxzept6feoi3nkdkkq/playlist/2yBkzHIRVFlbQ61ZV4zOiK?si=lQPgMuuXQya51CM395nYZw

  • M.A.Greene: Watching your YouTube videos, you mentioned you are a teacher, mother and wife. How you do balance so many obligations and how did you learn to balance your obligations with writing?

Kim Chance: It’s definitely not without effort, and I’ve certainly not completely mastered it yet. In order for me to juggle it all, I have to follow a pretty strict schedule. Not just when it comes to writing, but life in general. I have a planner that I take with me everywhere, and I literally have to schedule my life down to the hour. I set long-term and short-term goals for myself and then I do my best to schedule the amount of time necessary to achieve those goals. It doesn’t always work out that way—life is messy after all!—but I really try to hold myself accountable.

Most of my writing time is scheduled for the evenings after my children are in bed. It’s not ideal; I do my best writing during the day when my brain is fresh, but my children are my priority and when I’m with them, my mom hat is the most important one I wear. I’m also pretty tough on myself, and I try not to get bogged down with excuses as to why I can’t write. This often means I write when I’m exhausted or sick or just generally don’t feel like writing. It’s not easy, and sometimes I only get a few paragraphs written, but I firmly believe that dreams don’t work unless you do. I’m certainly not one of those writers who can write every day, but I do my best to get at least 2-3 writing sessions in a week. I also work on my lunch breaks whenever I can.

I won’t lie, juggling writer life with real life is incredibly challenging, and I don’t always feel like I’m successful at it. However, writing is important to me, so I do everything I can to make sure it remains a priority, in spite of my crazy schedule.

  • M.A.Greene: I follow you on twitter and have participated in #chance2connect, a twitter session where you ask writers/aspiring writers questions and they have a chance to connect with each other writers in environment that fosters respect and kindness. How did you come up with the concept of #chance2connect?

Kim Chance: Writing was a very lonely experience for me when I first started, and once I got plugged into the writing community, I wanted to help other writers do the same. Twitter has a pretty active writing community, so I figured it would be a great place to make some connections. I’d participated in other twitter chats before and really enjoyed them, so I thought it would be a great way to help my fellow writers make friends!

  • M.A.Greene: Often in your YouTube videos and on twitter you often say the phrase “Dreams don’t work unless you do.” I even remember when you were promoting people being able to buy shirts with the phrase on it. How did you first realize that slogan could apply to writing and when did the slogan reside with you on a personal level?

Kim Chance: I came across the quote early on in my writing career and it’s just been something that has stuck with me ever since. While I can’t take credit for it, it’s definitely become my personal mantra and something I believe very strongly in.

  • M.A.Greene:The cover of Keeper is beautiful and intriguing. Did you have any influence in the cover design and if so what was that process like?

Kim Chance: I did, which is not usually the case with traditional publishing. I’m very lucky! I did a video all about the process and my experience with it. You can see it here: https://youtu.be/h9CjyAK-cOA

  • M.A.Greene: Does it ever feel surreal being interviewed about your book and writing process? Did it in the beginning?

Kim Chance: YES! Even with a published book, there are times when I don’t feel like a real author. It’s always very exciting to be asked for an interview!

  • M.A.Greene: Keeper has a sequel you are working on Seeker, without too many spoilers what can tell us about the process for that book? Is it easier writing a sequel? What challenges are different writing Seeker compared to Keeper?

Kim Chance: Writing a sequel is incredibly difficult, and since I’m on deadline for this book, there’s even more stress and pressure to deal with. I wrote Keeper in a vacuum with no deadlines or even any expectations. The exact opposite is true of Seeker. It’s a much different experience and there have been a lot of highs and lows. I’m sure it will all be worth it in the end, but it’s pretty challenging so far. Time will tell! Also, I’m chronicling my experience with Seeker in a video series called The WIP Diaries on my channel. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLTi-b65qDGLsRDvso8R3xAPZlVrWJda94

  • M.A.Greene: What advice would you give aspiring writers in regards to staying motivated, the publishing journey, or so forth?

Kim Chance: My biggest piece of advice for aspiring writers is don’t compare your writing journey with anyone else’s journey. It is so easy to look at others’ success and take it an indication that your own will never come. Writing is an emotional journey, and when we start asking the question of “Why them? Why not me?” it not only affects our writing, but it affects who we are as people. Don’t put yourself in the position. Success is not measured by how many book contracts you’re offered or how many times your name hits that NYT bestseller list. Figure out what your definition of success is and don’t let anyone or anything make you feel like you can’t achieve it. You can, and you will!

You can read Kim Chance’s Keeper on amazon. https://www.amazon.com/Keeper-Kim-Chance/dp/1635830125/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1542915445&sr=1-2&keywords=keeper

Diversity and Teen Writing

🌈 Lucia 📚

M.A. Greene96: Hello there. My name is M.A.Greene a writer reaching for publication. I am revising a YA Sci-fi/Fantasy novel and write short stories and poems. You can follow my writing journey on Twitter at https://twitter.com/MAGreene996 . I will be interviewing BrucoliLucia a teen writer, about her opinions on diversity in Young Adult stories and her journey as a writer and personal journey as well. So first how old are you and at what age did you know you wanted to be a writer?

BrucoliLucia: Hello, happy to be here! I’m fourteen years old and I’ve been telling stories for as long as I can remember: even when I couldn’t write yet, I’d tell my mom stories and she’d read them back to me! But I’ve been seriously writing for about two years now.

M.A.Greene96: That is so wonderful that you are fourteen and serious about your writing journey. What have you published and what are you working on?

BrucoliLucia: I am currently working on my first novel, a YA science fiction story. I have published three guest posts on other websites (you can find a list on http://www.luciabrucoli.com ) and have anonymously written 15 articles for a news platform over the past year.

M.A.Greene96: Having written 15 articles in one year is impressive at any age. What made you decide to publish articles?

BrucoliLucia: In the very beginning, I realized I needed a platform to make my name known in the writing community. I chose YouTube at first, where I’d record videos talking about my writing journey and giving advice. I wanted a voice in the writing community, but making videos didn’t work out. I talked to my parents, and after deleting my account I turned some of the scripts into articles. That’s where it all started! In a strange way, I’m glad that YouTube wasn’t successful: writing articles for other websites makes me feel happy with myself, and I wouldn’t want it any other way.

M.A.Greene96: Well I am sure those who you wrote for are very happy about your decision as well. What are your favorite genres that you read?

BrucoliLucia: Thanks! I like YA best, even though I occasionally enjoy Adult classics. My favorite genres are contemporary and science fiction: the former because I can relate more to the characters, and the latter because of the scientific implications and technologies it includes.

M.A.Greene96: That makes sense. I love YA because there are so many messages and people discovering aspects about themselves and the world around them that shape them so fundamentally. I also enjoy science fiction for the reason you explained as well. One thing that very important in Young Adult literature is diversity. Because everyone is not the same race or other category as another other people. Can you explain your thought on diversity in YA?

BrucoliLucia: I think we definitely need more diversity, especially in YA where people go through changes and realize who they really are. Writing characters various colors, genders, orientations, mental/physical issues, body types or a combination of them all… it lets people see themselves in the books they read, which is really important. As the reader, it enriches the experience and lets us see ways of lives that we might not be familiar with. So not only does it give the people who are represented a voice, but it also builds empathy, awareness and sheds light on stereotypes. Of course, it must be *proper* representation where the author has researched/drawn from their own experiences/had sensitivity readers!

Yes, it does. I have always identified as female, and as I read (good rep!) and researched about how people can identify, I thought that including my preferred pronouns was a good step. As for being bisexual, it took a while. My immediate family members are Allies and so have exposed and explained the different gender and sexuality orientations to me. I was an ally for a long time before thinking of my own orientation. Then I realized I noticed girls as much as boys and started having romantic feelings for them. Too scared to admit my feelings even to myself, I went in denial and tried to ignore it all. It was strange because I knew everyone would be okay with it, but still felt insecure. So, I started watching queer YouTubers, read amazing rep that helped me find my stance, and eventually came out to the people closest to me: only to find out they’re perfectly okay with it, and I never had to worry!

M.A.Greene96: It sounds like you were very thoughtful and took time before realizing this. What are some ways you believe YA literature can use sensitivity and accurately portray different orientations especially those who identify as being bi since that is how you identify your orientation.

BrucoliLucia: Most of all, I think that any gender and sexual orientation rep should be handled with care, since in the world of today it still a sensitive topic, and also should be *accurate*! There are still the authors that write about orientations that they have no clue about, have done no research, haven’t read other books with that orientation and haven’t asked anyone of that orientation for their own experiences. There is nothing wrong with writing characters different from us, but I do think we should do appropriate research to make sure the representation isn’t problematic. The first thing I do when looking up a new book is to see if it is accurate rep and isn’t just based off of stereotypes 🙂

M.A.Greene96: Doing research about those that are in a minority group, the author does not fall into sounds like smart advice for any genre or age range of the readers.

BrucoliLucia: Yes it is, since a person’s circumstances shape their battles, and therefore their mindset as well.

M.A.Greene96: I know you did research and self-reflection to determine you where bi did you have any LBGT friends who helped give you advice or where an influence to help you come to that conclusion?

BrucoliLucia: I had the support of an LGBTQ+ teacher who was the first person I came out to. He helped me a lot, explaining what it all meant and perfectly phrased what I was feeling. My friends were also very supportive when I told them I was questioning my sexuality: they are all Allies, and helped me a lot throughout my journey.

M.A.Greene96: That is good you had an adult and your friends were a support system for you. Do you think having LGBT representation in books helps teens with coming to conclusions about their sexuality?

BrucoliLucia: Yes, definitely! Not only it helps us understand the terms/labels used, but it also helps us feel less alone. Not many people have a ‘human’ support system to help them navigate through the journey in realizing their sexuality, and reading books with good rep. and relating to the characters helps us- or at least me- a lot. Watching movies and reading books with LGBTQ+ characters is also a way for closeted teens to privately explore their sexuality if they feel like their environment isn’t open enough to give them the answers they need.

M.A.Greene96: What advice would you give teens who are privately exploring their sexuality vs those that have come out?

BrucoliLucia: To those privately exploring their sexuality: I feel you. I know how it’s like to be in the closet: you kind of want to come out and get it over with, but you feel safer hiding who you are, even though it can feel suffocating to do so. In the perfect world, we wouldn’t even need to come out, loving whoever we want without people saying “wait… You’re not straight?” as if that was the default. If you feel comfortable enough, I’d highly urge you to come out to someone whom you know will accept you. It helps so much to know that someone is there for you, willing to defend and protect and support you. I’d also highly recommend going online to look at terms and to read novels where characters have a variety of sexual orientations. For those already out to the world, I admire you so much for embracing who you are. Keep going and speaking out, because it raises awareness and one day we may live in a world where sexuality isn’t ‘taboo’. Always remember that you are not alone and that your sexuality is simply part of you: nobody can take that away.

M.A.Greene96: Are there any authors and books you would recommend that show diversity well?

BrucoliLucia: Simon versus the Homosapiens Agenda is great gay rep, and I hope that the sequel, Leah on the Offbeat, will have successful bisexual rep. Willful Machines also has amazing gay rep. Let’s Talk About Love has as MC a Black biromantic greysexual. I am not the first or the last, but I do feel that the biromantic feelings were represented well! A good way to find good LGBTQ+ rep is on the Lesbrary and on Twitter’s @LGBTQReads !

Simon versus the Homosapiens Agenda is great gay rep, and I hope that the sequel, Leah on the Offbeat, will have successful bisexual rep. Willful Machines also has amazing gay rep. Let’s Talk About Love has as MC a Black biromantic greysexual. I am not the first or the last, but I do feel that the biromantic feelings were represented well! The Lesbrary and Twitter’s @LGBTQReads are great places to find LGBTQ+ rep!

M.A.Greene96: Do you think there are any unique challenges or advantages with teens that realize they are bi compared to other orientations?

BrucoliLucia: Yes, definitely. Society tends to put people in boxes and categories, and that’s pretty much how the world works. Either people have to ‘fit in’ or they are ‘shunned’. Don’t get me wrong: being a non-heterosexual always has it’s challenges. But something unique we have to go through is people thinking were just confused, experimenting and that we have to choose one side: straight or gay. And unfortunately many experience this from within the LGBTQ+ community as well! Some also don’t understand that our orientation is the same regardless of the gender of our partner: in other words, we don’t switch from straight to gay depending on who we’re with.

M.A.Greene96: That that sounds frustrating. Defiantly struggles to keep in mind when writers write teen in that category. Being a teenager and dating can be hard enough, I know your only 14, but in your opinion do you think it is difficult if a bisexual teen is dating someone who is straight or gay to understand they would still be bi as you said no matter if they are dating them or not?

BrucoliLucia: For the teen, they’ll have a period of adjustment for sure, but the main worry would be if their partner accepts that they are bi. I am lucky that I found someone who not only accepts my orientation, but doesn’t really care what it is and loves me either way. It can be difficult to explain this orientation since it’s not always very straightforward, depending on where you fall on the bisexuality/pansexuality spectrum. The best advice I can give is simply to talk about it. If you are passionate and truly believe in what you’re saying, then the other person may be willing to understand.

M.A.Greene96: Back when I can’t remember what year it was, gay marriage became legal, even though I am not promoting teen marriages at all, do you think that affected LGBT teens?

BrucoliLucia: Yes, definitely. I think it made us feel validated and recognized, and it was the first step in raising awareness of non-heterosexual orientations. The legalization of gay marriage likely gave the necessary push to making people in not only gay relationships, but also any non-heterosexual relationships, come out. For me, it feels nice to know that I’ll be legal no matter if I marry a woman or a man someday.

M.A.Greene96: Do you remember where you were and how you felt when you learned gay marriage was legalized?

BrucoliLucia: To be honest, I had always assumed it was legal until the moment I heard that it was fully legalized in the US! I don’t live there, but the fact that one of the greatest international powers had legalized same-sex marriage made me really, really happy. I didn’t know I was bisexual at the time, but my parents and I, being strong Allies, celebrated it. I hope that more countries will legalize same-sex marriage and prevent LGBTQ+ discrimination around the world 🙂

M.A.Greene96: So as far as any other minority groups such as race or disability are there any recommendations you could give?

BrucoliLucia: A Raisin in the Sun (a play), Sugar, Everything Everything, The Sun is also a Star and Mission Mumbai for non-white race reps, all of them touching on culture as well. Unfortunately I don’t have many disability recs: there’s Bionic where the MC loses parts of her body because of a car crash, and The Fault in Our Stars where the MC is terminal with cancer, both great.

M.A.Greene96: Those sound like interesting books. Speaking of books, can you tell us, spoiler free, a bit about your novel your working on?

BrucoliLucia: Sure! It is a YA science fiction story, with POC, anxiety and LGBTQ+ rep. I am currently revising it… Here’s the blurb! A decade after World War Three, drones start to attack humans again, especially in Hermingheart, England. Anne’s friend Roy is taken. Anne wants to find Roy. Roy wants to escape. Iris wants to save her people. They’ll each have to give up something: or they’ll all be destroyed.

M.A.Greene96: Thanks for providing that blurb for us. Have you finished writing your manuscript’s first draft are you revising it? What stage are you at?

BrucoliLucia: I have finished drafting, yes, and now I’m going through 10 revision stages I set for myself. I worked on ‘big picture’ revisions for the first two rounds focusing on plot, characters, settings etc before working my way into details such as subplots. I am now on R8, working on small edits. Being the hyper-organized schedule fanatic that I am, I further divided it in different sub-stages. I am now at the last sub-stage, where I go through the manuscript and focus on tiny edits looking at things such as grammar, word choice and sentence structure etc. I’m really excited: I’ll give it to my Mom to edit it after this, and then it’ll be time to recruit beta readers!

M.A.Greene96: Wow that is a very dedicated revising process. How did you come up with it?

BrucoliLucia: I watched many YouTube videos beforehand, and decided I could try and break “revise this novel” into smaller, manageable parts. It started off as a five-round plan where I had deleting placeholders, revising characters, setting, subplots and then line edits. I changed it over and over again as I discovered deeply-rooted plot holes, deleted and added characters, and after almost a year of revising it became a ten-round plan. It helps me a lot to do this, because the satisfaction of giving myself a ‘check’ was motivation to keep going to experience that feeling again.

M.A.Greene96: You definatly take your craft seriously. How do you manage to juggle the demands of school work/ a social life/ and your writing?

BrucoliLucia: It is really hard: school takes up most of my time since I’m there all day, and then I have extra-curricular activities and/or homework. Even though I love writing, I put school first because there isn’t a deadline for my book, whereas there is for school. As for social life? I don’t have much if it! Of course I like going out in weekends sometimes, but I am introverted and gain my energy by staying at home rather than in social situations. I can pretty much only write in my free time, which unfortunately isn’t a lot, but I make do. I try my best not to procrastinate too much and stay organized by making lists: I’ve got one for deadlines, one for goals, daily lists of things I want to finish when I get home from school, and put reminders on my calendar to keep track of it all. In times where life is hectic such as this month, I even make another separate schedule that is the first thing I see when I walk into my room to make sure I don’t procrastinate. Granted it’s a lot sometimes, but the joy I have from finishing a task, writing a chapter or spending some time with a friend is worth it.

M.A.Greene96: You are a very organized young lady. I am sure that will help you when you go to college and work as well. What advice would you give aspiring teen writers?

BrucoliLucia: Thanks you! The main advice I’d give teen writers would be to find your people. We experience a lot of criticism and incredulity at our projects, with people saying we’re too young or aren’t capable of achieving our dreams, solely because of our age. Don’t listen to them. Instead, find the people who will support you both when you’re on a roll and living your dream, and when you just want to give up and chuck your laptop out your window. Twitter has helped me so, so much: I’ve learnt a lot about writing and that we all go through the same things. It’s okay not be okay. I wrote a full post on writing advice for teen writers for YA writer Kim Chance.

M.A.Greene96: Thank you so much for this insightful interview. I will always have a special place in my heart for teen writers. I had many writing attempts as a teenager and wrote about characters from my manuscript I am revising now, Overshadowed by The Majestic Color, a YA sci-fi/ fantasy story. I dove into learning from writer’s digest magazines and articles online. One piece of advice I would like to pass onto teen writer’s whether you have published or not. Is to always believe in your stories and stick to the ones that majestically haunt you. Those ones that won’t go away, that’s where your passion will be. And as Kim Chance, the author of the young adult fantasy Keeper often says “Dreams Don’t Work Unless You Do.”

BrucoliLucia: That is beautiful!

Book review of Brie Farmer’s Warrior Protect

Fantasy wallpapers high resolution 1Brie Farmer’s novel, Warrior Protect was a story I was anticipating to read once I discovered the premise. I was honored to read an ARC (advanced reader’s copy) of this book. A royal princess, Aurora, marry gets into an arranged marriage is nothing new. However, when the young woman agrees to do so and the agreement is she will protect him because she has been trained as a warrior since childhood, that is new. I was intrigued by how the gender dynamics were switched and she was marrying for wealth only. Her fiance Cade, always seems to dart glowering looks at her so she automatically is not taking a liking to him. When she gets letters from a mysterious person what will she discover? How can this arranged marriage blossom into love? Will Aurora and Cade able to protect each other from what comes? The characters are three dimensional. Brie Farmer does a great job of showing the characters strengths, weakness and everything in between. The details are precise without verbose and this story is unique. Anyone who enjoys High Fantasy, romance and unique take on what it means to love and protect should get this book once it is on the shelves.

My name is M.A.Greene, a writer reaching for publication. My twitter link https://twitter.com/MAGreene96.